3.1 Interim Presentation 1

Poster One: There was mostly positive feedback on this design, however there were a few things that weren’t so successful. People thought the message was clear, however there is ambiguity around the kebabs - some people couldn’t tell what they were. Could the background circle be a plate or grill instead? Could the perspective be different? Also, the ‘lifesaver’ connection is not so clear (the lifesaver on the kebab and in the text). The text is required to understand the imagery, the design relies on the text to work, and they are quite separate, could the text be different - say something different? Could the words be food skewered onto the kebab? I’m unsure how this imagery could work and change across different media such as the website if we choose to go with this design.




Poster Two: There was positive feedback and the message came across clear. The details that delivered the meaning was the 'SOS' lawnmower and broken house. There is more of a connection to an environment however, the trees give a suburban feel that juxtaposes the damaged and broken home after a disaster, that the feeling is supposed to be urgent. The tone is a bit too calm. The disaster also has to appear more recent, maybe reflect on an everyday emergency. The fact that the man is mowing the lawn after a disaster conflicts "being prepared", but it could also be ironic. It could be a bit more dynamic, a the moment it is all centered/ symmetrical. Could I change the horizon line/ put it on an angle. The text is clear but there needs to be a better connection to the imagery (Lifesaver), we could use dad jokes/puns. The illustration style is nice and both of our posters compliment each other. There are a few ways that this poster would continue on a website.


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